tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post112516396304387660..comments2023-10-24T18:10:17.695+05:30Comments on E Vestigio: Maelstrom in the MindExtemporehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10480705396381116507noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1128463064659278702005-10-05T03:27:00.000+05:302005-10-05T03:27:00.000+05:30actually, this is a very nice story...again, I nee...actually, this is a very nice story...again, I need to change my comments!!Stormy Zephyrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13969756672692979401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1127883720179457442005-09-28T10:32:00.000+05:302005-09-28T10:32:00.000+05:30Pretty ok, that story!Pretty ok, that story!Stormy Zephyrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13969756672692979401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1127883660214723892005-09-28T10:31:00.000+05:302005-09-28T10:31:00.000+05:30This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Stormy Zephyrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13969756672692979401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1127765113786305552005-09-27T01:35:00.000+05:302005-09-27T01:35:00.000+05:30@Jo: Thanks! :)@Jo: Thanks! :)Extemporehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10480705396381116507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1127739527348772402005-09-26T18:28:00.000+05:302005-09-26T18:28:00.000+05:30I loved the way you've described the entire scene....I loved the way you've described the entire scene. Could literally visualize the entire piece :)<BR/><BR/>-JoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1127594058877424072005-09-25T02:04:00.000+05:302005-09-25T02:04:00.000+05:30Am sorry for delay in responding but its been a li...Am sorry for delay in responding but its been a little crazy at work of late. :)<BR/><BR/>@Finnegan: LOL! Menage trois, eh? Am glad you liked it. :)<BR/><BR/>@ .:A:. : Thanks, A! *broad smile*<BR/><BR/>@ Shamik: Am quite sure you did as well!<BR/><BR/>@Incognito: Thank you!<BR/><BR/>@Prat: Thanks for coming by and for your kind words. Am glad you liked it and I do hope you'll be by again.<BR/><BR/>@Anil: Thanks for coming by. About the couple, well, their relationship is platonic - in my head, they are friends who do not need words to communicate anything - be it motive, intent, etc. And yes, the italics are the thoughts in her head, the things that she is thinking. I do hope you liked the piece though!<BR/><BR/>@Geetanjali: Thanks for the tag - this is the second time I have been tagged for this. Will get down to it asap. :)Extemporehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10480705396381116507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1127459258225489852005-09-23T12:37:00.000+05:302005-09-23T12:37:00.000+05:30(You've been tagged)(You've been <A HREF="http://geebaby.blogspot.com/2005/09/return-of-muse-55-word-story-tag.html" REL="nofollow">tagged</A>)G Shrivastavahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11067631774356885766noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1127311833744088352005-09-21T19:40:00.000+05:302005-09-21T19:40:00.000+05:30finally found time to read this...very atmospheric...finally found time to read this...very atmospheric piece...rich with the minutiae of life...but I was wondering about the couple...what is their r'ship? are they friends? ex-lovers? and the stream of conciousness (am I right?) in italics seemed to make the waters murkier...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1127297970388006852005-09-21T15:49:00.000+05:302005-09-21T15:49:00.000+05:30Beautifully crafted together.I also go on record t...Beautifully crafted together.<BR/>I also go on record to say that I liked reading the comments too.<BR/>Especially the way you said " terribly trite"!<BR/>Something about the way they are juxtaposed.Prathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15891134436149274481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1127249046648074112005-09-21T02:14:00.000+05:302005-09-21T02:14:00.000+05:30I like the bit where she says "Did I ask you to co...I like the bit where she says "Did I ask you to come with me?"<BR/><BR/>I guess shutting the door behind her is the turning point of the story and her life as well.<BR/><BR/>Must say you have captured the thoughts beautifully.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1127240508830574942005-09-20T23:51:00.000+05:302005-09-20T23:51:00.000+05:30:) hmmm.... nice.. I can go deeper, knowing you......:) hmmm.... nice.. I can go deeper, knowing you...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1127233402489120512005-09-20T21:53:00.000+05:302005-09-20T21:53:00.000+05:30It definitely was not!:-)It definitely was not!<BR/><BR/>:-). : A : .https://www.blogger.com/profile/04410256917258728976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1127223049923098382005-09-20T19:00:00.000+05:302005-09-20T19:00:00.000+05:30@Manan: You're just mean! @Geetanjali: It's been a...@Manan: You're just mean! <BR/><BR/>@Geetanjali: It's been a very long time since I told a story and I am not still not very happy with the end. Am very glad you liked it. Gives me hope for me next yarn! :)<BR/><BR/>@ .:A:. : Why thank you! :) I was so afraid I was going to be terribly trite!<BR/><BR/>@Brood Mode: Thanks so much! I look forward to seeing you here again. Will certainly be back at your blog.Extemporehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10480705396381116507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1127203987433814302005-09-20T13:43:00.000+05:302005-09-20T13:43:00.000+05:30loved the flow of events and of course the suspens...loved the flow of events and of course the suspense... great pieceBrood Modehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02994428573971274712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1127145275590462722005-09-19T21:24:00.000+05:302005-09-19T21:24:00.000+05:30Beautiful. I really like the way you have captured...Beautiful. I really like the way you have captured the moments in this one. The inner thoughts works very well.. : A : .https://www.blogger.com/profile/04410256917258728976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1127049202978689872005-09-18T18:43:00.000+05:302005-09-18T18:43:00.000+05:30I liked the flow of this piece and how exetrnal ev...I liked the flow of this piece and how exetrnal events were interspersed with the inner thoughts...the best part of it was the turns it took. Some of them surprised me...for instance I initially thought they are a married couple, then when he asked her if she's going back to her place - lovers...only to find something else at the end.<BR/>The end was the best part!G Shrivastavahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11067631774356885766noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13539110.post-1126994982313199102005-09-18T03:39:00.000+05:302005-09-18T03:39:00.000+05:30By patience, do you mean 25 years of it?By patience, do you mean 25 years of it?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com